Sunday, October 21, 2012

I have been using the analysis template for all of my body paragraphs of my essay, and while I went back to add variety,  each "This develops" sentence always goes off what I said in the previous paragraph. Is there something I can do to avoid this?

1 comment:

Ms.D. said...

Change it to this introduces and link to what is coming up. Or you could do a rhetorical analysis paragraph and analyze the stylistic choices of the author. Or simply connect it to the main subject/theme/ motif of the thesis.