Saturday, October 20, 2012

thesis help?!

Writing and inductive essay and I want to tweek my second point thesis. Right now it's: Effective leaders are deemed/valued as the most honorable in society. Any ideas?

2 comments:

Ms.D. said...

Your point isn't really arguable the way it's written. Of course effective leaders are valued, is there a reason other than the obvious for this?

Ms.D. said...

Why are the most honorable? Vs say the most feared or respected?