Friday, October 22, 2010

Check it out for me,Thesis

In the Iliad These three characters show that individualism and a lust for teme gives a person the ablility to lead becuase it gives other someone to follow.
  It's not the most solid thing in the world but yeah.
Basicly what i got is that through individualism and the lust for teme it gives people something to follow becuase to step up and say well this is what a we are fighting for and what not.

1 comment:

Ms.D. said...

Work on making your language more concise and specific. Here are some possibilities:

In the Iliad, Homer uses ___,___, and ____ to show that individualism and a lust for time (italicize this greek word)create? motivate? leaders to take charge of the community? take responsibility for the community?

I think you can leave out of the thesis the last part about having someone to follow and just explain that in your paper.