Sunday, October 24, 2010

So in between the two parts of my paper (see my previous post) should I include a transitionary paragraph? something like

The previous three examples have shown how the warriors follow action, or do not follow lack of action. A leader recognizes what communities follow and uses the effective means to lead. Since the soldiers follow action, the leaders give action and escalate it to risky action in an attempt to lead better. The risky actions of the leaders in turn benefit the community.

1 comment:

Ms.D. said...

You have the right idea but you need to work on your word choice. Action is repeated too many times.