Friday, October 22, 2010

Clarifying my Thesis

Thesis- "The glory of war is valued more than the catalyst of conflict."

I'm basically trying to say that the grit, violence and time in battle is glorified and considered very important, while the cause of the conflict (Helen) is basically put on the back burner for the entire epic.

Should I just focus on the fact that violence of war is glorified and forget about the reasons of conflict?


Any suggestions would be appreciated!

1 comment:

Ms.D. said...

Who values the glory of war more than the original conflict?

Soldiers? Women? Gods? Everyone?

This isn't a bad idea, but you might want to include a reason why this is so.

Because...., the glory of war...