Sunday, October 24, 2010

Too many ideas in conclusion?

Is it all right if I were to put a real-world example into my conclusion? Not like the "Real World Conclusion" format where you set up a situation, but a real historical event that I think is relevant to my topic. Does that make my conclusion too broad and confusing?

1 comment:

Ms.D. said...

If you think the event is relevant to your topic and helps your reader understand your final thoughts about your topic, then I think it's fine to include.